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[t99_2015]

So, I decided to try my hand at writing stories and I decided to write a fanfiction (erase those dirty images from your mind). 

Well, it's based on the Fallout Franchise and for those who need a bit of reference, go to the Fallout Wiki and search up Mr. House

Keep in mind, this is just an experiment for now and I just need some constructive criticism.

Thanks in advance for the help you will give me.

 

The story: https://www.fanficti...-the-Apocalypse

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And while you're at it, read mine!!!!

 

https://www.fanficti...53050/1/Missing

 

[Blesd12]

Did one based on destiny once, got to like 4 pages typed, 8 on paper before I got lazy, have another one planned tho

[t99_2015]

_Maho_Nishizumi_212, on 15 May 2018 - 02:36 AM, said:

And while you're at it, read mine!!!!

 

https://www.fanficti...53050/1/Missing

 

 

40k words, nice! This could be an interesting story during my spare time.

Give me a few days to read it and I'll review it on Fanfiction

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t99_2015, on 14 May 2018 - 09:40 PM, said:

 

40k words, nice! This could be an interesting story during my spare time.

Give me a few days to read it and I'll review it on Fanfiction

 

Thanks! I'm still working on it. 50k as of now,

[t99_2015]

Welp, just re-read my story and realized I left out a few words.

Meh, I'll deal with it right now.

[__Seeker__]

To the town of Agua Fria rode a stranger one fine daaaay...

 

Ill read it as soon as I get back from work! Anything Fallout related is welcome!

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t99_2015, on 14 May 2018 - 09:54 PM, said:

Welp, just re-read my story and realized I left out a few words.

Meh, I'll deal with it right now.

 

Do you know how often I have 2 do that?

[Melissa_Durat]

The House always wins 

[t99_2015]

Melissa_Durat, on 17 May 2018 - 01:06 AM, said:

The House always wins 

 

In all honesty, I always thought that Mr. House was the best choice of them all.

 

NCR is too overextended and too bureaucratic. Not the sort of government you can trust in a post-apocalyptic wasteland 

Caesar's Legion.... Does anyone really need to explain this at all?

Wild Card depends too heavily on how the player shapes the Courier. You can have a tyrant that makes Caesar look like an innocent child or you can have a democratic society that won't be able to advance at all.

Mr House, on the other hand has a well-thought out long-term plan that not only allows humanity to survive but also thrive.

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t99_2015, on 16 May 2018 - 08:22 PM, said:

 

In all honesty, I always thought that Mr. House was the best choice of them all.

 

NCR is too overextended and too bureaucratic. Not the sort of government you can trust in a post-apocalyptic wasteland 

Caesar's Legion.... Does anyone really need to explain this at all?

Wild Card depends too heavily on how the player shapes the Courier. You can have a tyrant that makes Caesar look like an innocent child or you can have a democratic society that won't be able to advance at all.

Mr House, on the other hand has a well-thought out long-term plan that not only allows humanity to survive but also thrive.

 

You know things about ur fic. You've got a leg on me, to an extent. I've been fighting writer's block for a week now...